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The Life I Use To Hate

Growing up no independence
Restricted by my mom's time limit 

Forced to go to school 
Because they said education would be my greatest tool 

"I can't wait to be an adult" 

Riding that bus with all that fuss 
Praying God please let them hush 

Everyone making choices for me 
Telling me I'm to young for some things to see 

"I can't wait to be an adult" 

Working all day for nabs and a bottle of coke as my pay
One of these day I'll be a millionaire I use to say 

I'll do what I want and do it my way 
And dare anybody to have something to say 

"I can't wait to be an adult" 

Now I'm a adult 
My mom tried to warn me about this cult 

Now I have my independence 
Though my student loan debt is longer than a life sentence 

"I wish I could go back to the life I use to hate" 

I do what I want and do it my way 
Yet people still have something to say 

I have my own car 
But without gas money I can only go but so far 

"I wish I could go back to the life I use to hate" 

No worries no bills 
Just fun time filled with thrills 

I'd give anything to go back to the life I use to hate 
For little did I know that life was pretty great

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/2/2016 3:48:00 PM
I can so relate
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Rizwan Saleem
Date: 2/2/2016 3:53:00 PM
My pleasure.
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Asia Schmidt
Date: 2/2/2016 3:51:00 PM
Lol, thank you for your feedback:)
Date: 2/1/2016 5:27:00 PM
Asia, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Asia Schmidt
Date: 2/2/2016 2:36:00 PM
Thank You:)
Date: 2/1/2016 10:16:00 AM
Really enjoyed this reminiscing about old dreams. Well done, a great first post.
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Asia Schmidt
Date: 2/1/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thank you:)
Date: 1/20/2016 7:09:00 PM
Asia,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend ~LINDA~
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Asia Schmidt
Date: 1/21/2016 1:50:00 AM
Thank You! I'm looking forward to learning and connecting:)
Date: 1/20/2016 5:07:00 PM
Nice work, I know the young feeling. Skat
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Asia Schmidt
Date: 1/20/2016 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, sure makes one appreciative of the little things in that in reality mean a lot

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