Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Haiku

The Life Expectancy Depends On You

The life of a ship
                                                 depends on how you build it.
                                                          Strive for perfection.



Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

05-24-2012

                                                       "Only ONE life to live"

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Mahtab Bangalee December 4, 2019 at 4:03 AM yea; exactly right you are; happy and sorrow of life depends on the one's expectation!

Linda Jackson October 5, 2013 at 6:44 AM A really good haiku with pearls of wisdom. Best wishes Linda x

Margeret Bailey September 21, 2012 at 1:48 AM Well said..Nice write!

Doreen Wright August 5, 2012 at 8:57 PM Amen!! Great advice. We are all creations and creators...to some extent. I am captivated by your words Ink! Keep the pen moving Sweetheart! Pace Ink-U-Script August 7, 2012 at 5:59 AM Thank you always Doreen!!! :)

John Loving Iii July 5, 2012 at 7:11 PM nice advice. Pace Ink-U-Script August 7, 2012 at 5:59 AM Thanks John!!

Poet Destroyer A June 27, 2012 at 4:54 PM G Pace, i live striving for flawlessness & completeness ... I think my ship is steering the wrong direction... lol... Well, I'm blaming it on them engineers ... they forgot to build in the complet and flawless shift stick and the right perception break... Now to come and think of it..I don't even have an anchor on my ship... LOL.....THIS IS ME...pd Pace Ink-U-Script August 7, 2012 at 5:58 AM Lol...too funny!! Love your comment!!

Gwendolen Song June 16, 2012 at 7:52 PM Hey! Great thot's with this haiku..Can u imagine if God told Noah to go build an ark and he had no direction at all...Perfection is found in the Holy Book! Happy Father's Day, G. From G! lol Pace Ink-U-Script June 16, 2012 at 7:56 PM Thank you so kindly!! Although, I'm not a father!! :)

Dan Kearley June 4, 2012 at 8:17 PM You said it all! And so did everybody below. So all I can do is :o) Pace Ink-U-Script June 4, 2012 at 8:54 PM Thank you Dan!! Always good to see you!!

Sean L Sanders June 2, 2012 at 10:51 AM Nicely said poet Pace Ink-U-Script June 2, 2012 at 12:39 PM Thank you Sean!!

Bl Devnath May 30, 2012 at 12:52 PM The life of a ship, yes but ours always strive for perfection. Nice haiku, loved always, bl Pace Ink-U-Script May 30, 2012 at 1:01 PM Always a pleasure for you to share your comments!!!

Patrick Cornwall May 27, 2012 at 8:36 PM Strive for perfection or swim...P Pace Ink-U-Script May 28, 2012 at 5:47 AM Lol..yes indeed Patrick..A pleasure seeing you!!!

Joseph May May 26, 2012 at 8:37 PM very nice haiku G...thanks for stopping by... blessings...Joseph

Shaz Cheesman May 25, 2012 at 4:48 AM Oh yes.....this is so true in everything. I imagine these exact word in a marketing slogan for something that really matters! ..............Shaz x Pace Ink-U-Script May 25, 2012 at 9:35 AM Thank you so very much for sharing with me Shaz!!

Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2012 at 7:26 PM G Pace, this life is all I need... a very extraordinary haiku..enjoyed stopping by tonight~ take care :-) PD Pace Ink-U-Script May 24, 2012 at 7:47 PM Thanks PD always!! Hugs

Carma Sanderson May 24, 2012 at 3:40 PM "So dead on" Love it! Pace Ink-U-Script May 24, 2012 at 6:12 PM Thank you Carma!!

Ronny Madonsela May 24, 2012 at 12:49 PM excellent haiku here. And true that. Love the messege u send with such few words. RONNY Pace Ink-U-Script May 24, 2012 at 6:11 PM Thank you Ronny!!

Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2012 at 11:38 AM True - - - Well written. - oxox Anne-Lise Pace Ink-U-Script May 24, 2012 at 6:11 PM Thanks Anne!!

Nathan D. May 24, 2012 at 10:16 AM nice write Poet Destroyer A June 27, 2012 at 4:49 PM yes,,nice write... Pace Ink-U-Script May 24, 2012 at 6:10 PM Thank you Nathan always!!