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The Life Expectancy Depends On You

The life of a ship depends on how you build it. Strive for perfection. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 05-24-2012 "Only ONE life to live"

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/4/2019 4:03:00 AM

yea; exactly right you are; happy and sorrow of life depends on the one's expectation!

Linda Jackson

Date: 10/5/2013 6:44:00 AM

A really good haiku with pearls of wisdom. Best wishes Linda x

Margeret Bailey

Date: 9/21/2012 1:48:00 AM

Well said..Nice write!

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/5/2012 8:57:00 PM

Amen!! Great advice. We are all creations and creators...to some extent. I am captivated by your words Ink! Keep the pen moving Sweetheart!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 5:59:00 AM

Thank you always Doreen!!! :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/5/2012 7:11:00 PM

nice advice.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 5:59:00 AM

Thanks John!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/27/2012 4:54:00 PM

G Pace, i live striving for flawlessness & completeness ... I think my ship is steering the wrong direction... lol... Well, I'm blaming it on them engineers ... they forgot to build in the complet and flawless shift stick and the right perception break... Now to come and think of it..I don't even have an anchor on my ship... LOL.....THIS IS ME...pd

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/7/2012 5:58:00 AM

Lol...too funny!! Love your comment!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/16/2012 7:52:00 PM

Hey! Great thot's with this haiku..Can u imagine if God told Noah to go build an ark and he had no direction at all...Perfection is found in the Holy Book! Happy Father's Day, G. From G! lol

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/16/2012 7:56:00 PM

Thank you so kindly!! Although, I'm not a father!! :)