The Letter

I remember that day so clearly when i met you
you came and gave my life a whole new meaning 
i was an empty shell walking without hope 
and you came out of nowhere and gave me something to believe in

We started out rocky seemed pointless at one point 
because we always seemed never to get along 
but now it’s like the lord came and touched us 
he developed this relationship, now we are so strong 

A night spent without you is like hell i must admit 
i feel so empty when i am not with you 
and when we are upset it drives me crazy 
especially when I’m wrong and don't know what to do 

But baby i love you world without end 
and i forever dedicate my soul and my heart 
and i promise i will never lie or hurt you 
even though i told a few at the start 

No one is perfect we all make mistakes 
but the mistakes help us to change for the better 
baby i know i have said i love you a million times 
but i want to show how much i mean it by writing this letter

some people say they love but they are just saying words 
they really don't know what the meaning of love is 
and love is kind of complicated in way i admit 
but anyone can figure it out it doesn't take a math whiz 

so as i conclude my letter my darling my sweetheart 
just want you to know my heart is yours down to the core
and if there is any day you doubt my love baby 
ill grab a pen and paper and I’ll sit and I’ll write a million more 

By: Marlon A Malcolm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/26/2017 7:28:00 AM
I like the way you put this together, it shows diligence and gives clear and broad description, very nice
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Date: 10/2/2017 7:28:00 PM
thank u really appreciate it
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