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What is this I see under my Christmas tree? It's a letter, from Fifty year old me. Complete with a photo, I don't look half bad. The very best thing, I'm not looking sad. I tell myself don't worry, things are okay. When you turn Seventeen, you'll run away. Life turns out better than what you think. You are not like dad, you don't turn to drink. There's lots I could tell you about tomorrow. Then you wouldn't learn from joy and sorrow. Live with real purpose, take some chances. Kiss pretty girls, go to some dances. Tell people you love them, show them you care. As much as you wish, they won't always be there. You will love yourself once you realize. The things you've been told, are nothing but lies. So go out in the World, it's your happy place Even if today, that is not the case You are the one living, my yesterday Trust your choices, things go the right way I read my own words, from Fifty year old me I'm happy to know, one day I'll be free. Hello Goodbye Contest

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Date: 1/8/2013 4:33:00 PM
Hello Richard, stopping by to say hi .., Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. always~pd
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/8/2013 5:21:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/6/2013 5:48:00 PM
Short but sweet glad you were happy with your choices not amny are... ;)Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/6/2013 10:24:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the visit.
Date: 1/5/2013 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Richard!! Happy New year!Good day! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2013 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Maria, same for you as well.
Date: 1/2/2013 8:04:00 AM
Richard, this is the perfect combination of honest emotion and subtle humour. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I really loved reading this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/5/2013 12:33:00 PM
Thanks Heather, I appreciate your nice comment.
Date: 1/1/2013 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:57:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend, Richard! Happy New Year, too! love/hugs, Leonora
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2013 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Leonora, your visits are welcome and appreciated. I hope you had a fun Newyear.
Date: 1/1/2013 2:01:00 AM
Hello Richard :D happy new year too congrats on your big win too :D - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/1/2013 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, hugs to you to
Date: 12/31/2012 5:32:00 PM
Richard congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2012 7:14:00 PM
Thanks David, Happy New Year
Date: 12/31/2012 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations . A nice concept. Wish you a happy new year, Mehnaz
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2012 7:14:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 12/31/2012 2:20:00 PM
Big congrats Richard, and all the best for the new year xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/31/2012 7:15:00 PM
Thanks Mandy!
Date: 12/21/2012 8:01:00 PM
Hello Richard :-) you made it worth my while reading and picturing the entire scenario starting at the bottom of the x-mass tree. A photo of your memories to come... An exciting way to wise up, by following the wiser... (older)... good luck in the contest...LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 8:13:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 12/21/2012 4:11:00 PM
This is really a gorgeous letter, the way you speak to your self is really respecting who you are right now and this is great :), soupmail
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Yanny, your response warms my heart.
Date: 12/21/2012 2:04:00 PM
well done! best of luck in the contest...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Ilene
Date: 12/21/2012 9:11:00 AM
Such great advice, Mr. Richard! A good one for the contest... lotsa luck! Merry Christmas, my good friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Jack
Date: 12/21/2012 7:52:00 AM
This is a wonderful and amazing write my friend! I truly loved each and every line of this poem, a real truthful piece! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this morning! What a delightful write, Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Russell.
Date: 12/21/2012 7:47:00 AM
Nice advice to yourself blondy my friend xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/21/2012 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Mandy.

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