The Letter

What is this I see under my Christmas tree?
It's a letter, from Fifty year old me.

Complete with a photo, I don't look half bad.
The very best thing, I'm not looking sad.

I tell myself don't worry, things are okay.
When you turn Seventeen, you'll run away.

Life turns out better than what you think.
You are not like dad, you don't turn to drink.

There's lots I could tell you about tomorrow.
Then you wouldn't learn from joy and sorrow.

Live with real purpose, take some chances.
Kiss pretty girls, go to some dances.

Tell people you love them, show them you care.
As much as you wish, they won't always be there.

You will love yourself once you realize.
The things you've been told, are nothing but lies.

So go out in the World, it's your happy place
Even if today, that is not the case

You are the one living, my yesterday
Trust your choices, things go the right way

I read my own words, from Fifty year old me
I'm happy to know, one day I'll be free.

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A   Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Hello Richard, stopping by to say hi .., Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. always~pd
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January 8, 2013 at 5:21 PM
Thanks Linda!
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Short but sweet glad you were happy with your choices not amny are... ;)Congrad's on your win Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the visit.
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January 5, 2013 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win friend Richard!! Happy New year!Good day! :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Thanks Maria, same for you as well.
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January 2, 2013 at 8:04 AM
Richard, this is the perfect combination of honest emotion and subtle humour. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. I really loved reading this one.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 12:33 PM
Thanks Heather, I appreciate your nice comment.
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January 1, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Gasun Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 7:57 AM
My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear poet friend, Richard! Happy New Year, too! love/hugs, Leonora
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Thanks Leonora, your visits are welcome and appreciated. I hope you had a fun Newyear.
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January 1, 2013 at 2:01 AM
Hello Richard :D happy new year too congrats on your big win too :D - hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Thanks Yanny, hugs to you to
Williams Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Richard congrats on your win, excellent write...David
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Thanks David, Happy New Year
Veetil Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations . A nice concept. Wish you a happy new year, Mehnaz
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Thanks!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Big congrats Richard, and all the best for the new year xx
Lamoureux Avatar
December 31, 2012 at 7:15 PM
Thanks Mandy!
A   Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 8:01 PM
Hello Richard :-) you made it worth my while reading and picturing the entire scenario starting at the bottom of the x-mass tree. A photo of your memories to come... An exciting way to wise up, by following the wiser... (older)... good luck in the contest...LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 8:13 PM
Thanks Linda.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 4:11 PM
This is really a gorgeous letter, the way you speak to your self is really respecting who you are right now and this is great :), soupmail
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Thanks Yanny, your response warms my heart.
Bauer Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 2:04 PM
well done! best of luck in the contest...
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Thanks Ilene
Ellison Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 9:11 AM
Such great advice, Mr. Richard! A good one for the contest... lotsa luck! Merry Christmas, my good friend!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 10:23 AM
Thanks Jack
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December 21, 2012 at 7:52 AM
This is a wonderful and amazing write my friend! I truly loved each and every line of this poem, a real truthful piece! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this morning! What a delightful write, Great Work!!
Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Thanks Russell.
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December 21, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Nice advice to yourself blondy my friend xx
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December 21, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Thanks Mandy.
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