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The Leaving Bride

I watched her as she walked down the isle
Divine in a dress purely white
To meet with the man she loved
And to pledge him her heart.
I will miss her smile
Her kindly ways
Forever
I am
Lost

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Heather Ober

April 29, 2013 at 9:22 AM

I hadn't seen this one of yours before! You have done a great job of delivering a punch of emotion with this nonet. The sense of loss is so evident, especially with that very effective ending.

Poet Destroyer A

March 30, 2013 at 4:46 PM

Isaiah, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA

Aijaz Mahesar

March 25, 2013 at 12:16 PM

Painful!

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 25, 2013 at 10:38 AM

Congrats on your featured nonet.

Donna Jones

March 24, 2013 at 7:36 PM

Beautiful Isaiah...but sad...congrats on the featured spot..donna

Audrey Haick

February 28, 2013 at 7:48 PM

This is sad but beautiful, still, Isaiah! Congratulations on a very fine win! Always, Annalise

Ralph Taylor

February 28, 2013 at 2:54 PM

Excellent. Isaiah. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph

Connie Gildersleeve

February 28, 2013 at 12:34 PM

Congrats on your win. Connie

Poet Destroyer A

February 27, 2013 at 9:59 PM

a nice winning poem~PD

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2013 at 11:29 PM

I really like this one. Reminds me of the movie scenes where the poor guy has to watch his true love marry another!! Great title for this one too. have you tried etheree? They are one line longer than nonet and one of my favorite forms to write in.

Andrea Dietrich

February 15, 2013 at 11:28 PM

My beau is neither rich nor poor, he is simply imaginary. haha. NOw let me see this poem of yours.

Charmaine Chircop

February 2, 2013 at 2:02 PM

Hope this is fictional.I love happy poems but sad poems at times can feel more real.Somehow more beautiful too.Yep so sad but Oh so beautifully penned- Charma

Holly Moore

October 30, 2012 at 6:32 PM

This is sad...I hope whoever this is about got passed it. Obviously, there is someone much more special out there. Your Nonet inspired me to write one. Check it out if you have time....Holly Moore

Poet Destroyer A

October 27, 2012 at 9:17 PM

isaiah, enjoyed your nonet poem* Goodnight! Always~ PD

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