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The Leaving

Promises broken;
Scattered in the winds of change-
Dreams forever lost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/4/2015 6:58:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/4/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for the comment. Grace and blessings. Jan
Date: 3/12/2015 2:09:00 PM
Wow.. This is just incredible!!
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/12/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thanks, Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/11/2015 5:18:00 PM
Beautifully penned Janet I so love the impact of these short forms:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/11/2015 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I played a lot with the form several years ago and am thinking of writing more in Japanese forms and include some tanka and choka. It makes me structure my thoughts and I've been unstructured for a while now..lol