The Leaving

Promises broken;
Scattered in the winds of change-
Dreams forever lost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 6:58 AM
Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching
Cervenka Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Thank you so much for the comment. Grace and blessings. Jan
Allison Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 5:18 PM
Beautifully penned Janet I so love the impact of these short forms:-) Hugs Jan xx
Cervenka Avatar
March 11, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Thanks Jan. I played a lot with the form several years ago and am thinking of writing more in Japanese forms and include some tanka and choka. It makes me structure my thoughts and I've been unstructured for a while now..lol
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