The Lay of the Land


      He who strives diurnally

        ~ rests in peace nocturnally
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 6:07 PM
most clever...liked it
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:36 PM
I changed the last word from 'rectally' at the end --- you'll be glad to know, I'm sure...
Goldsmith Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Few words with much said. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Wolf Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:34 PM
Sometimes, the less said, the better.
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