Neil Tuneer Poet Acrostic

The Last Wish

 The Last Wish

Ahh! In this last day,
Let me see the sun shining on the hay......
for a last time......
in a last vision.....
let me see the Almighty.......,
of creation.....

Let the horrid sins of men,
Be Subdued.............,

Let the sea of hope.........,
tide us over.

For all,and ever
let sickness and ailments.......

Be banished for ever......


Let me for a last time...............................................,
Close my eyes,
Forever.......................................................................................................................

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Mustapha Mohammed July 25, 2013 at 8:40 PM I say amen to that brother.

Iveren Ikyembe July 10, 2013 at 8:53 AM I like this a lot.thanks for sharing! Neil Tuneer July 10, 2013 at 10:19 AM Thanks a lot!!

Poet Destroyer A July 10, 2013 at 8:39 AM Hi Neil, i love the vision you wish to visit on your last day... a beautiful and lovely way of peace.... .................. .................... enjoyed your forever feel.... LINDA Neil Tuneer July 10, 2013 at 10:19 AM I have entered your contest. hope to chat with you sometime..

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2013 at 7:50 AM - Hey Neil - I like your poem very well ..... - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Neil Tuneer July 10, 2013 at 8:08 AM I have finished deleting the extra 15 copies!!!! thanks!! for your comment.