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The Last Vacation

The sun seemed to last forever As we walked hand in hand My dad and I together Our feet sinking in the sand His smile was so bright As he looked at me What a beautiful sight Of the ocean we could see The South Carolina sun rays Beat down on our tanned skin Like we would feel it always Like the happiness we felt within The waves crashed on the shore Grazing our bare feet Our footprints not seen anymore As the cool water washed away the heat We made it to the house we rented The beach was right behind The morning always ocean scented Sunset and sunrise will always stick in my mind The week was full of relaxation And sightseeing all around I’ll never forget that last vacation Your laughter was a constant sound I wish we would’ve traveled there At least one more time before it was too late For life has many tragedies so unfair And you can not dodge your fate I will always watch the videos you took Close my eyes as they fill with tears from the memories For you will never again be able to look Or feel that glorious ocean breeze

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/26/2013 10:19:00 AM
Oh my this is amazing Elissa, thanks for sharing vivid memories, the perfect tranquil feel.. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/25/2013 1:36:00 AM
Elissa,.., I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/25/2013 1:34:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Elissa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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