The Last Time

Our last day on this Earth...
we do not know;

The last words we say...
we must think so;

The many pains we suffered...
we must let go;

The loving hearts we touched...
they now will grow.


For "Verse any form" contest sponsored by Brian Strand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 2:06 AM
I see you won with this very thoughtful poem, George! Congratulations.
Onclaud Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:32 PM
so well said, george.. salute..:) huggs, nette
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Enjoyed this very hopeful work..Congrats..Sara
Poet Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 4:11 PM
Congrats George on your win.Wonderful words penned here.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:41 AM
Congrats George on another great win with these lovely words my friend...luv..
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Good morning and congratulations on your win in Brian's "Verse" contest George. Love, Carol
Stewart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 8:45 PM
i truly love this poem and believe you words deeply. We really dont know I lost my 19 year old friend yesterday and its so shocking I still cant believe it.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 8:09 PM
amazing lines of pure perfection George.. which will bless all who read them..good luck in the contest with this inspirational piece luv..
Jones Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 6:19 PM
amen. thanks, George. Namaste~N
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