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The Last Time

Today is the day where you and I gathered for the last time Today's the day where I shall wave goodbye I shed a tear as I hugged you tight For I shall see you no more by my side Your shadow was the last thing that disappeared Before your scarf let go and came back to where you once belonged

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/25/2008 5:53:00 AM
As i go down [smile] your talented, extended poetry, which means one poem has a little to do with the other, beautiful poetry. it spoke to me well
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Date: 12/17/2008 8:58:00 AM
Wistful and sad... lovely flow and sorrowful emotion. The image of the scarf is most effective. Well done Sara! Best wishes, Keith
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