The Last Sunset

A watercolor treasure of flaming hue
          I will always recall the last sunset with you
Wine glass prisms dancing round in our hands
          Plotting and scheming our midsummer plans

The sun hangs lower, a glimmering pendant
          Bestowing its shimmer on your face, resplendent
Only minutes to go, only moments to cherish
           Foretelling a destiny, a love that will perish

Though darkness ensues and my heart is sleeping
           A new day will break to end all the weeping
But no matter the course, all my life through
           I will always recall the last sunset with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 3, 2017 at 2:01 PM
This was great Mike. You have given us a complete scene on your poem from beginning to end. A little sad but oh those memories can feel so good.
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July 3, 2017 at 2:22 PM
Thanks Chris
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July 3, 2017 at 1:44 PM
There are some great lines in this one Mike. and sad feelings I feel too. Well done! :)
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June 21, 2024 at 12:10 PM
Thank you Heidi, Happy Friday xxoo
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