The Last Organ Grinder

Echoes of despair swirled in my head
 as I inhaled the crisp autumn air
 My relationship was hanging by a thread
 I knew the breakup was near

 As i walked through the streets that afternoon
 I heard the organ grinder's familiar tune
 My heart churned out its own sad refrain
 Wondering if we would get back together again

 By the time autumn faded to winter snow
 I had met someone new
 Snowflakes swirled to and fro
 As the north wind blew
 Seasons rolled around, then autumn returned, knocking on the door
 But I never saw the organ grinder anymore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/ending. Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
One Avatar
November 22, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Nostalgic storytelling Joseph.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Nicole Avatar
November 13, 2023 at 7:32 PM
When a relationship is hanging by a thread, it's easy to see, the connection is about to break. Your thoughts are tender and emotional, all at the same time. My best to you, Joseph. Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 6:38 PM
Oh wow. I love the direction you took this in!
Situation Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 6:35 PM
Meaningful to me personally. Depresion will hit you sooner or later. and escaping it is not easy.
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 5:17 AM
I like how you weaved the prompt into love lost and found--your ending line spells the essence of the theme. Splendid write, Joseph.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 12:26 AM
Console yourself with the new lover, once the old left. Great stuff. Blessings.
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