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The Last One To Know

Last One To Know I parked out in the parking lot and I walked in the door. I saw you dancing there with him. What the hell am I here for? I stepped up to the bar there's so much more to realize. As I looked at the bartender and as he hid his eyes. I turned away to look away but every where I looked I see. Peoples embarrassed glances looking back at me. The music changed its tempo. and you both started dancing slow. While the whole world just sat staring at the last one on earth to know. There were no words for me to say. I didn't know what I should think. I ordered up a double and I drank it in one drink. As I drove away that night with just the radio to remind me. Of everything I never had and how I left it all behind me. I can't forget where all I've been I'm not sure where I'll go. It seems I'm clinging to the hope you'll be the last to know. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/3/2015 10:11:00 PM
that ending was just perfect as she left you uninformed of her stupidity you leave her in the dust and keep her wondering, enjoyed this one, :) SKAT love
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/4/2015 2:22:00 AM
What a great surprise to have several poems read and enjoyed by you. I appreciate you doing this and taking the time to give me feedback. It means a lot to me. God bless. Ed.

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