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The last moments of my life

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Gershon Wolf

May 17, 2025 at 10:04 PM

Remarkable, this: Amanda writes of her own death, and then she disappears... Who knows?... Maybe a message will be sent us in the distant future. ~ Harry Seldon

Amanda Nolan

June 3, 2025 at 6:37 AM

Indeed, it’s both eerie and fascinating. These words now hold a weight they never did before. What could this have meant? It’s unsettling to think about, yet I can’t help but wonder what a message the future might reveal... It is true that I have returned. However, the miracle that saved me feels less like a blessing and more like a sentence. The extended time I have been given might have been better as two minutes instead of two years.