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The Last Line

leaving life’s party can’t outlive my stay; pack my soul for the new day 25th December 2018 Competition: The Last Line Sponsor: Silent One 2nd placement Contest Brian's Choice 7 Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2018 1:08:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 2:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your congrats and hugs! Wishing you a very happy and healthy 2019. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/29/2018 10:02:00 AM

Hi Ann, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 9:43:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis for your kind return and congrats. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2018 6:50:00 AM

New day, a new dawn.... Nice thought Ann.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 9:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Silent One for my placement in your competition. I do really enjoy writing a Monuko poem, a poetry style I knew nothing about before Poetry Soup, so I am learning daily! Wishing you and yours a happy 2019 with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/25/2018 9:31:00 PM

Great one-liner, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/26/2018 12:45:00 AM

Many thanks Line, kindest thoughts Ann xx