Ann Gilmour Poet Monoku

The Last Line

leaving life’s party can’t outlive my stay; pack my soul for the new day

25th December 2018
Competition: The Last Line
Sponsor: Silent One
2nd placement

Contest Brian's Choice 7
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2018 at 1:08 PM - Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ann Gilmour December 30, 2018 at 2:08 PM Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your congrats and hugs! Wishing you a very happy and healthy 2019. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Alexis Y. December 29, 2018 at 10:02 AM Hi Ann, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis Ann Gilmour December 30, 2018 at 9:43 AM Thank you so much Alexis for your kind return and congrats. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Silent One December 29, 2018 at 6:50 AM New day, a new dawn.... Nice thought Ann.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Ann Gilmour December 30, 2018 at 9:42 AM Thank you so much Silent One for my placement in your competition. I do really enjoy writing a Monuko poem, a poetry style I knew nothing about before Poetry Soup, so I am learning daily! Wishing you and yours a happy 2019 with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier December 25, 2018 at 9:31 PM Great one-liner, Ann. Ann Gilmour December 26, 2018 at 12:45 AM Many thanks Line, kindest thoughts Ann xx