The Last Line

leaving life’s party can’t outlive my stay; pack my soul for the new day

25th December 2018
Competition: The Last Line
Sponsor: Silent One
2nd placement

Contest Brian's Choice 7
Sponsor Brian Strand
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Date: 12/30/2018 1:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win :) - Best wishes for the new year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your congrats and hugs! Wishing you a very happy and healthy 2019. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/29/2018 10:02:00 AM
Hi Ann, Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 9:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis for your kind return and congrats. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/29/2018 6:50:00 AM
New day, a new dawn.... Nice thought Ann.. Have a great start to the new year.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/30/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Silent One for my placement in your competition. I do really enjoy writing a Monuko poem, a poetry style I knew nothing about before Poetry Soup, so I am learning daily! Wishing you and yours a happy 2019 with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 12/25/2018 9:31:00 PM
Great one-liner, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/26/2018 12:45:00 AM
Many thanks Line, kindest thoughts Ann xx
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