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The Last Kiss

Im so far from who i thought i would be Life seems to have got the best of me Hopes have vanished once inspired by childhood dreams. All my expectations are not what they seem The pit that has swallowed me now has all control My spirit quit fighting for my battered soul My smile and my feelings all seem phoney to me. I may walk freely among you but inside im not free. Im just an intruder in this world without a home that is mine A castaway from a society that turns a blind eye. I could run far away and never be missed But i keep hanging on dreaming of one last kiss.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/5/2020 5:23:00 PM

Wow - awesome last line to wrap this up. Rings so true, most of us can relate, Carl. A FAVE for me.

Carl Fraser
Date: 3/10/2020 8:49:00 PM

Thank you Line, I appreciate you stopping by. Sometimes dreams are all that's left. Blessings, Carl

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/2/2017 6:49:00 PM

Hi Carl , nice to meet , deep emotional and more common than you may think your write is very impressive , thanks for sharing it has struck a cord in me :))

Carl Fraser
Date: 6/3/2017 4:06:00 AM

Thankyou Niall nice to meet u2. Will get to reading everyone when i have more time. Carl

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/1/2017 1:05:00 PM

So well expressed, and so sad. May you be blessed with happiness and that kiss :)

Carl Fraser
Date: 6/3/2017 4:01:00 AM

Thank you Heidi I truly appreciate u stopping by. Carl