The Last Goodbye

When fire breathes it's last goodbye 
Extinguishing the Suns lidded eye 
The shade brings life as dark surrounds 
And unexpected screams abound 
Blood slithers down a rusty blade 
Sheathed in flesh a soul to fade 
A maniac smiles behind a mask 
Relishing his demonic task 
Footsteps echoing from behind 
A sudden turn, no life to find 
Exercising futility 
Victims always franticly 
Search in vain to find escape 
From a most horrific fate 
Fear surely gripping their hearts 
It's claws will tear their lives part 
And when it happens no time to run 
An unexpected end begun 
Pain shoots forth like lightning's flash 
As hopes and dreams are burned to ash 
Blood spilled across a dirty floor 
The life that was now shuts its door 
And from the body comes a sigh 
Like fire breathing it's last goodbye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 7:11 AM
This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!
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October 28, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Ramon, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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