The Last Goodbye

I plunged into the open air,
Felt a rush of blood within,
And spread my arms, so unaware
Of chills upon my skin.

I, now aboard this one-way flight,
Saw the moon and distant stars,
Discernible beyond the light
Of city lamps and cars.

I peered into each living space
To see beyond the hazy glass
And witness each new warm embrace
Before the great impasse.

But lonely faces filled my view,
Took from me my final hope,
And showed me that my hunch was true:
That we can’t see the scope

Of broken homes and true neglect,
Silent victims of abuse,
Unfit parents with no respect
For lives that they produce.

We cannot see just what we’ve done
So I lunged into the sky;
With no place to which I could run,
I said my last goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Yep! On a plane to nowhere. Enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. daver
Fisher Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 12:23 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week, rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserving poem being featured this week Christopher Love, Carol
Dickson Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Wow. This was pretty epic and while reading it I got chills all over (that usually happens when I like something). I hope you keep writing :)
Berry Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 4:19 PM
Thank you. I randomly got this idea and just ran with it. I'm glad you liked it.
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