The Last Goodbye

Sagging, hanging, off the bones
Getting so big but never falls. 
It clings and tightens its hold on me,
It’s under my skin, but still you can see.

Running, Fighting, trying to shed these beasts
That have taken their hold on me. 
Feeding off my pain and fears, 
Making me want an end to be near.

Spiraling down a dangerous hill, 
If this monster keeps growing
It could kill. 
I want an out, but I don’t know how.
I am ready to give this monster,
Its last goodbye.

Now I've reached my lowest point, 
If I never say goodbye, 
All there is left to do, is die,
Because memories haunt 
What reality couldn’t kill.
So, in the end
The big, sagging monster 
Will never,
Let you say your last goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 10:30 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:04 PM
brittany b, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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July 27, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Brittany, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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