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The Last Drop of Water

THE LAST DROP OF WATER Clouds of despair will block out our sun Trials and burdens each weighing a ton God brings those clouds into your life Not without conflict, discord or strife Are they punishment or sent to refresh Love incarnate through a Saviours flesh Do not flee from raindrops that may fall Let them linger enough for mercy’s recall Grace will fall –heavenly drops from above Till the last drop of water-a chastising love

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/6/2014 4:08:00 AM

Ye, we are inspired by the same source! Beautifully done!

Patrick Nigros

Date: 9/10/2013 1:35:00 AM

beautifull i love it.... :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 7:00:00 PM

Lovely --uplifting. Kim, you are an amazing writer... I love this poem, we are forever searching for love the light, and here your words speak volume.. I love it :) xox...Linda

Don Johnson

Date: 8/15/2013 5:27:00 PM

deep stuff here babe...yes it aint all roses hey....lessons upon the way...

April Gabriella

Date: 8/15/2013 2:08:00 PM

This is such a beautiful piece. I love the way the words flow, I LOVE the rhyme and tone. Wonderful indeed. :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/15/2013 1:29:00 PM

wonderful write on mercy and love Kim....best wishes

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2013 1:29:00 PM

gracefully crafted with deep words that light the soul... onward, kim.. what a beaut!..:) huggs

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/15/2013 12:51:00 PM

Loved how you developed this one... Leading to the answer... wonderfully done.

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/15/2013 9:11:00 AM

Unbelievable spiritual piece I'm loving this ! So well done!!!!! Laura :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2013 8:59:00 AM

Wonderful expression of your faith.

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/15/2013 8:34:00 AM

This gave me so many goosebumps. Warm, fuzzy feelings abound while understanding the realities of it all. This was wonderful! So happy you posted something new, Kim! =D

Kim Van Breda
Date: 8/15/2013 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Drake-- inspired by recent trials and tribulations and the stormy weather here today in Cape Town. I have been busy formatting my second publication-- time consuming so haven't been writing much. Anyway, it hit the printers table today, so I am "free' to write once again.