Kim Van Breda Poet Couplet

The Last Drop of Water

THE LAST DROP OF WATER

Clouds of despair will block out our sun
Trials and burdens each weighing a ton

God brings those clouds into your life
Not without conflict, discord or strife

Are they punishment or sent to refresh
Love incarnate through a Saviours flesh

Do not flee from raindrops that may fall
Let them linger enough for mercy’s recall

Grace will fall –heavenly drops from above
Till the last drop of water-a chastising love

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Demetrios Trifiatis March 6, 2014 at 4:08 AM Ye, we are inspired by the same source! Beautifully done!

Patrick Nigros September 10, 2013 at 1:35 AM beautifull i love it.... :)

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2013 at 7:00 PM Lovely --uplifting. Kim, you are an amazing writer... I love this poem, we are forever searching for love the light, and here your words speak volume.. I love it :) xox...Linda

Don Johnson August 15, 2013 at 5:27 PM deep stuff here babe...yes it aint all roses hey....lessons upon the way...

April Gabriella August 15, 2013 at 2:08 PM This is such a beautiful piece. I love the way the words flow, I LOVE the rhyme and tone. Wonderful indeed. :)

Joseph May August 15, 2013 at 1:29 PM wonderful write on mercy and love Kim....best wishes

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2013 at 1:29 PM gracefully crafted with deep words that light the soul... onward, kim.. what a beaut!..:) huggs

Carol Eastman August 15, 2013 at 12:51 PM Loved how you developed this one... Leading to the answer... wonderfully done.

Laura Mckenzie August 15, 2013 at 9:11 AM Unbelievable spiritual piece I'm loving this ! So well done!!!!! Laura :)

Richard Lamoureux August 15, 2013 at 8:59 AM Wonderful expression of your faith.

Poet Tacito August 15, 2013 at 8:34 AM This gave me so many goosebumps. Warm, fuzzy feelings abound while understanding the realities of it all. This was wonderful! So happy you posted something new, Kim! =D Kim Van Breda August 15, 2013 at 8:42 AM Thanks Drake-- inspired by recent trials and tribulations and the stormy weather here today in Cape Town. I have been busy formatting my second publication-- time consuming so haven't been writing much. Anyway, it hit the printers table today, so I am "free' to write once again.