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The Last Drop of Water

THE LAST DROP OF WATER

Clouds of despair will block out our sun
Trials and burdens each weighing a ton

God brings those clouds into your life
Not without conflict, discord or strife

Are they punishment or sent to refresh
Love incarnate through a Saviours flesh

Do not flee from raindrops that may fall
Let them linger enough for mercy’s recall

Grace will fall –heavenly drops from above
Till the last drop of water-a chastising love

Copyright © Kim Van Breda | Year Posted 2013

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Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/6/2014 4:08:00 AM Ye, we are inspired by the same source! Beautifully done! Login to Reply

Patrick Nigros Date: 9/10/2013 1:35:00 AM beautifull i love it.... :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/16/2013 7:00:00 PM Lovely --uplifting. Kim, you are an amazing writer... I love this poem, we are forever searching for love the light, and here your words speak volume.. I love it :) xox...Linda Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 8/15/2013 5:27:00 PM deep stuff here babe...yes it aint all roses hey....lessons upon the way... Login to Reply

April Gabriella Date: 8/15/2013 2:08:00 PM This is such a beautiful piece. I love the way the words flow, I LOVE the rhyme and tone. Wonderful indeed. :) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/15/2013 1:29:00 PM wonderful write on mercy and love Kim....best wishes Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/15/2013 1:29:00 PM gracefully crafted with deep words that light the soul... onward, kim.. what a beaut!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 8/15/2013 12:51:00 PM Loved how you developed this one... Leading to the answer... wonderfully done. Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 8/15/2013 9:11:00 AM Unbelievable spiritual piece I'm loving this ! So well done!!!!! Laura :) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/15/2013 8:59:00 AM Wonderful expression of your faith. Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 8/15/2013 8:34:00 AM This gave me so many goosebumps. Warm, fuzzy feelings abound while understanding the realities of it all. This was wonderful! So happy you posted something new, Kim! =D Login to Reply Kim Van Breda Date: 8/15/2013 8:42:00 AM Thanks Drake-- inspired by recent trials and tribulations and the stormy weather here today in Cape Town. I have been busy formatting my second publication-- time consuming so haven't been writing much. Anyway, it hit the printers table today, so I am "free' to write once again.