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The Last Drop

the last drop its falling apart but i haven't quenched my desires its the last drop, that has remind darkness falls, dreams collide the only one thing that was mine its going away and so am i i just realized, about my time just knew who was i i was a confused boy filled with hatred and lies i was marooned and i was doomed but i survived and i thrived and the last time these memories brings a smile i just can't bid goodbye nothing else,cause my hands are tied the last drop was so divine it made me cry, for the last time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/9/2024 9:38:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:23:00 AM
KARMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/7/2016 1:17:00 AM
Hi Karma, Enjoyed reading your poem, Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/25/2010 7:50:00 AM
Enjoyed the reading of your work..Memories can be good..Sara
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Date: 10/11/2010 6:10:00 AM
Very nice positive and emotional thoughts with self introspection, karma
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