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After much consideration, I believe Most people dim hope tight cleave. Grief is the vital human weave. There is comfort in easiness. People find delight in sleaziness. All are believed to speak falsities ness. Fear does not lead to depression or rage. For a while, fleeting yaw fears cast and assuage. Akin to ice cream when entirely dodge. If you've seen the colors, you cannot refuse them. If you've heard the sounds, you cannot reject them. If you put in a bit of effort, you will grow wisdom. People have been enduring painful toil. People have been rejecting any embroil The activity took them away from the turmoil. The prices were significantly lower. The risk of depleting their savings rise slower Desiring to save money while playing poker. This universe has been wholly upended. I must do it until the day I fall dead. You must proceed once the tank is loaded. Let's atone for what happened in the past. The obvious is simply being assert Tomorrow will be here and even fast.

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Date: 4/28/2021 2:51:00 PM
The line, "Desiring to save money while playing poker." It seems to be a contradiction in terms doesn't it. I found that one interesting. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/28/2021 11:11:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, There is much truth in your well written entry. I’m glad I read this today. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/28/2021 10:05:00 AM
Wise insights abound in this masterfully crafted gem, Lasaad. Best of wishes for the contest. hugs
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Date: 4/27/2021 2:52:00 PM
Your tank is certainly loaded Lasaad, and you put it all into this brilliant poem, so much going on, first stanza what an eye opener, right through to an upended universe, masterfully penning, a seminal piece, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 4/27/2021 2:55:00 PM
Ps don’t forget to date this one for the contest, best of luck
Date: 4/27/2021 2:07:00 PM
Great arguments. One delights in reading your poem.
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