The Last Dance

Autumn comes to watch
As the leaves prepare to dance
The trees bow to fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 7:43 PM
Get out the rakes, Buddy. A necessary evil. Not my favorite thing to do. Oh well I guess that's why they call it fall! Ralph
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 5:19 AM
Nice haiku with nice images on The last dance of the leaves, Larry
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September 26, 2010 at 7:58 PM
LARRY, COOLAND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL HAIKU TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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September 26, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Beautiful haiku, Larry. Hope to see some of those autumn colors when I leave for New Jersey soon. Love, Carolyn
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