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The Last Chapter

Through the gap between the closed drapes A maid peers in a daze An ashtray upon the table Held her undiffused gaze Clearly there was bright red lipstick Circles upon some butts A golden earring lies close by Lying cheat drives her nuts The fog lifted revealing all Airline ticket back home A scoundrel, cheater, liar, creep In the night he does roam A teardrop fell upon the floor As the click opened lock He slept peacefully this last night Gun shots silenced by the clock An airline ticket now possessed Swifter than that jet plane Around the block to catch the same Click, clack the sound mundane Last chapter typed upon white sheets The typewriter now still Headlines plastered across front page Lovers in motel were killed Sponsor: Giorgio AV Contest: Structured Forms Author: Sara Kendrick Written: December 6, 2014 This is written in a type of Poulter's Measure Actually each stanza is two fourteen syllable couplets but broken down into 8,6,8,6 with the rhymes on the 6 Some lines might be a little off..

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Date: 1/13/2015 12:02:00 PM
Great job Sara ..Merry Christmas,,,Happy New Year,,, and all the others I've missed... and many more to come,,,God bless,,,, and may many more enjoyable times be in your future... Agape Moses!
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:24:00 PM
SARA, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:34:00 AM
Very well written Sara. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:02:00 AM
Lovely piece well crafted, sara, congratulations on the win
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:30:00 PM
well here I am again to congratulate you on another well deserved win, keep them coming
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:51:00 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you Sara,from on set,I have no doubt in me that this would top table,thank goodness it does...huggs
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Date: 12/13/2014 6:33:00 AM
really love this piece sara golden pen dear friend
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Date: 12/12/2014 10:34:00 PM
My gosh, Sara, I just realized my comment is not HERE. What happened to it? I had come here earlier and told you how great it was the way you turned this into a murder story. Gosh, I hope not all my comments are getting lost today!! by the way, isn't this one for Craig's contest??
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2014 5:24:00 AM
Andrea, I did two of these and entered each in a contest.. Sara
Date: 12/12/2014 10:32:00 PM
that song you mentioned is called What a Wonderful Life, I think. Wasn't it by Herman's Hermits? I was madly in love with Herman when I was like 8 years old. How time flies.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2014 5:30:00 AM
Andrea, Yes, the song was "Wonderful World" and it was made famous by Sam Cooke and Herman's Hermits..It is on YouTube just type in the title of the song and on YouTube and you can get many renditions of the song..It is amazing at what we used to listen to and liked isn't it.. Sara
Date: 12/9/2014 8:37:00 AM
A fantastic creation my friend. Life presents us with so many chances to cheat on our significant other. Doing so is never a good thing. A momentary pleasure that only the truly selfish indulge in. Has ruined many a good home and family. Super 7 from me..
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Date: 12/8/2014 9:50:00 AM
Oh this is excellent poetry
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Date: 12/7/2014 11:00:00 AM
This totally magnificent Sara,goodluck in the contest...huggs
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Date: 12/7/2014 6:15:00 AM
Excellent. Beautifully crafted poem. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 12/6/2014 10:40:00 PM
You tell a sad and all too common tale here. Nice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/6/2014 1:21:00 PM
Great write Sara I hope are you submitting it to Craig's contest too Hugs jan x good luck:-)
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