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The Landing

the landing was successful and the flight was smooth coffee was delicious and the stewardess too cool what's it like on this planet what am i to expect are the natives restless do they easily object not that i care because i could'nt even if i could by nature i would'nt so lets be very clear about my presence here i come to share my language some happiness and anguish i'm sure you'll learn to love me as much as i love myself because i control The Situation the situation does'nt control itself

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2023 3:13:00 AM

Going by this first contribution to Soup I see that you have been on here 4 yrs before me; I also take it that you are very sure of yourself. Thank you for stopping by .... paul

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/29/2012 5:29:00 PM

Arene't you the clever one, injecting those last two lines about you. I've wondered why you chose to identify yourself that way. Neat poem TS; had to check out your earlier ones.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/14/2012 10:05:00 PM

Nice start. Welcome to the planet and the soup. you'll enjoy it here.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/22/2011 6:21:00 AM

Hi T.S always like to go back to one's first poem posted here on soup, i'm not disappointed, this is excellent. harry

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2011 7:54:00 AM

Control freak huh?? me too....

Stan Bridge

Date: 1/27/2011 1:11:00 AM

thank you for dropping by my page ok i really liked this my style is rhyme its form and content and style is good well written my friend PS didnt quite understand your comment on my poem 2nd chance about me having a soppy moment you saying you wish you had more ? anyway i enjoyed your write well done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2011 8:40:00 PM

hmmm this is about yourself NO doubt! How interesting this was your first poem here! but AS the situation, don't you also control yourself? I enjoyed this mucho. LUv, Andrea

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/18/2011 7:34:00 PM

much behind this...situation....nice...jimbo

Rick Rucker

Date: 1/15/2011 8:22:00 AM

Well done! Nice Quatrain.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2010 6:12:00 PM

I love it,, new kid,, Its nice to know someone so young can control a situation.. we older poets can't.. well not that old,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 12/26/2010 5:23:00 AM

Beautiful write T.S. so full of hope and faith. Lay

Cecil Hickman

Date: 12/25/2010 9:28:00 PM

Welcome to the soup and welcome as well to our world,,glad that you chose here to come and control situations as so many let situations control them,,,Thank You for reading and commenting on my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

George Stal

Date: 12/25/2010 9:58:00 AM

Should have looked atthis one earlier ... Good job ... and don't worry about the comment just knowing you looked is fine Stal

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/22/2010 4:36:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed reading your creative write tonight with it's interesting theme... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out the contests too... good luck with luv...and ...happy holidays...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/22/2010 5:22:00 AM

Very creative and interesting write on the landing,

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/21/2010 8:18:00 PM

welcome to the soup . hope you find the accomodations to your liking. nice start. john h loving iii