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The Lamentations of Fate

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Shadowy silhouettes and fragmented memories; ebony outlines inked by years of disappointment veil hope's complicity in using trivial deeds like colored crayons, to show God created those lines. Faith countered my enthusiasm for life with self-doubt, controlling my thoughts and dousing any sparks of hope. All that awaits me beyond death is oblivion, religion can't silence the lamentations of fate. (Verse) 6/27/2018

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/25/2018 4:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Emile: Very heartfelt lines. Best, SuZ

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/25/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Suzanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/24/2018 10:25:00 PM

Back to congratulate you again on your win again. Well done!

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/25/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/22/2018 12:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2018 12:41:00 PM

Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2018 9:32:00 PM

Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/22/2018 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/20/2018 11:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. You conveyed hopeless and acceptance in a poem about fate... like how you ended. Well done. :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/21/2018 8:36:00 AM

Thanks Susan, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/20/2018 12:16:00 AM

Congratulations, Emile on your first position win. "for faith failed to silence... the lamentations of fate" .. great line.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/20/2018 8:47:00 AM

Thanks Subimal, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Virginia Waters

Date: 7/19/2018 3:34:00 PM

superb penning. First place material indeed. Do see this result in many. sad but true.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/19/2018 6:21:00 PM

Thanks Virginia, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/19/2018 2:21:00 PM

Ahh, such a wonderful poem this is, truly a masterpiece and i really enjoyed reading it many congratulations on your top win in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/19/2018 2:29:00 PM

Thanks Faraz, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/19/2018 11:18:00 AM

Emile, this stunning poem vividly conveys the theme of hopelessness! Janice

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/19/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/19/2018 7:50:00 AM

- Many of the poems are so beautiful that they hit me in the heart ... I'm so glad I'm not going to judge ... I'm just gonna congratulate you on your beautiful topp win, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/19/2018 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 7/19/2018 7:16:00 AM

Very deep, and how many lament on fate.. some great lines in this, especially the colored crayons analogy... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/19/2018 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Silent One, I appreciate your comments and the placement in your contest my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/1/2018 8:44:00 AM

Lovely tone, an enjoyable lament...

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/1/2018 10:08:00 AM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Lyric Man

Date: 6/28/2018 5:45:00 AM

Hi Emile.. I enjoyed reading your work this morning. Always nice to check out creative lines with a cup of coffee!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/28/2018 9:00:00 AM

Thanks Lyric Man, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.

Kevin Shaw

Date: 6/27/2018 3:06:00 PM

Hello Emile, I enjoyed reading your poem, it had quite a profound impact on me, one which I can relate too. Now I am not a great reader of Prose, but this is a good piece, all the best to you, regards, Kevin

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/27/2018 3:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Kevin, I appreciate your personal comments my friend, Emile.