The Lake

In an evergreen forest 
Surrounded by a lake 
I owned a little cabin
Where my love I did take

Moss crept on the walls
Of the crudely built home
But in silent serenity 
We could be alone

She loved it more than I
That place beside the water
She wanted to stay forever and a day
Or whatever proved to be longer

Simple living
Minimal care
Clean country breathing 
In the pine scented air

The water rippled
And slowly swayed
During all hours
Of the night and the day

The woods teamed with life
And the trees filled with leaves
Birds fluttered along 
In the gently blowing breeze

We couldn’t escape 
This beauty astounding
We became one with the lake
Our hearts matched in their pounding 

Enamored were we
With our quiet possession
But this love that we had
Turned in to obsession 

Scared of the threat
Of having to leave
To go back to the world
Of death and disease 

We clung to the feeling 
Of everlasting bliss
Because while we were here 
We could never resist 

But late one evening 
As I sat by the fire and drank
My love, afraid of departing
Walked in to the lake and sank

I realized too soon
That I had to leave
And forget all about
This so called serene 

For it was not an earthly place
Yet not entirely fictitious 
Just outside of reality 
If you believe the superstitious 

That cabin by the lake
That my love knew so well
Called her soul to rest 
Was it Heaven or was it Hell?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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December 15, 2025 at 7:20 AM
What an allegory, Julien ! Such clear imagery made it sound for real. A vivid portrayal of beautiful but possessed love. ThkU for sharing & welcome to this Soup. Keep writing, blessings from South Africa to U., Ghairo.
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