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The Lake

The blue water of the the lake slowly flows by bringing a peaceful feeling My inner peace is coming to life, which the stress has been concealing The calm of the trees, finally green from spring, and the blossoms springing from the ground, is so serene I’m breathing in the air slowly and enjoying the scene The tranquil breeze touches my face causing me to breathe deeply and close my eyes I’m enjoying the still and quiet as all my anxiety quickly dies The birds have started chirping , the heron has come out to play I can now enjoy the lake for another precious day

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Date: 5/30/2021 6:18:00 AM
I have a favorite spot i go when I write, and you just described it. Every word made me want to strap on my hiking boots and get back there. Thank you for sharing!
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Kelly Ohara
Date: 6/16/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thank you. I love being there because it brings so much calm.
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Kelly Ohara
Date: 6/16/2021 6:02:00 AM
Thank you. I love being there because it brings so much calm.
Date: 5/13/2021 5:30:00 AM
This is a graceful and beautiful poem, Kelly. You truly used your words well and painted a picture in my mind of this wonderful lake scene. Cheers, Bridget
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Kelly Ohara
Date: 6/16/2021 6:03:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 5/12/2021 5:12:00 PM
Hello Kelly ... there is nothing like gazing across a body of water to regain the inner peace that has everything around more beautiful - thank you Kelly - Lindsay
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Kelly Ohara
Date: 6/16/2021 6:03:00 AM
I couldn’t agree more. It brings so much peace. Have a great day.

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