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The Lake

summer at the lake small children laughing loudly snake slithers through weeds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Paul Callus
Date: 4/3/2019 3:28:00 PM
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The naïve innocence of young children, compared to the cunning of the snake. A delightful tree-liner. Regards // paul
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/3/2019 11:40:00 AM
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Hello Allen Beilschmidts Sr. So nice to meet you.I like this poem you created. I like the scene you wrote about the lake. i like the water, I like the sound of the water, the waves hitting the shore. Have a nice day my friend.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/2/2019 5:44:00 AM
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Love the continuation of the "s" theme, and it makes the snake slither even more serious.
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W.A. Cholt
Date: 4/1/2019 12:56:00 PM
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Picture perfect. Atmosphere, suspense, the whole lot.
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/1/2019 2:30:00 PM
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thank you W.A.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/1/2019 9:30:00 AM
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Fantastic imagery, I was the kid enthralled with the snake ;) Enjoyed!
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/1/2019 2:30:00 PM
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thanks Maureen

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