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The Lake

summer at the lake small children laughing loudly snake slithers through weeds

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2019 3:28:00 PM

The naïve innocence of young children, compared to the cunning of the snake. A delightful tree-liner. Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/3/2019 11:40:00 AM

Hello Allen Beilschmidts Sr. So nice to meet you.I like this poem you created. I like the scene you wrote about the lake. i like the water, I like the sound of the water, the waves hitting the shore. Have a nice day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/2/2019 5:44:00 AM

Love the continuation of the "s" theme, and it makes the snake slither even more serious.

W.A. Cholt

Date: 4/1/2019 12:56:00 PM

Picture perfect. Atmosphere, suspense, the whole lot.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/1/2019 2:30:00 PM

thank you W.A.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/1/2019 9:30:00 AM

Fantastic imagery, I was the kid enthralled with the snake ;) Enjoyed!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/1/2019 2:30:00 PM

thanks Maureen