The Lady and Me

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For inspiration I search license free photography and write according to what the image suggests to me. This is one of hundreds I have done. I intend on posting 100 examples of this type of writing.

 

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I met her in the wake of night. A tiny flake of gold, traveling at the speed of light. I dipped my plume, and used her bright white on a canvas black, mapped my way to her land. Before I had another thought, my heart racing, gone this woman I sought. On the following eve, I returned to the blind spot Hoping for a reprieve. Nothing glowed not then, not 'nother 'leven times, 'n still I tried, but for not again then above the silence of a scream I heard a glow, saw a sound, I felt a vision, a faceless dream. It was my headless woman of yellow ore, my finely cut prism of glass, With an inviting scent she beckoned me to taste her fast Like a ray of sun I travelled through and to the other side I did pass. From solid to a multicoloured arch, from half to whole, and almost before it started, it ended, a dark grey cloud, with lightning, thunder and soul a lively pillow of moisture, burst. March 2 2016 armand

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Date: 10/7/2016 7:32:00 AM
Did I forget to tell you... Romanticly insane ... Luv. Linda
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Date: 10/7/2016 7:29:00 AM
You are an elegant man, this I know. Love how you reel your readers.... I'm captured.... Linda
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Date: 8/4/2016 10:37:00 AM
Alike a waking dream. This is rhapsodic, and romantic. A very disturbing, out-of-body memory. I like out-of-body stuff a lot. I like this poem a lot. Love, daver
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Date: 7/30/2016 6:57:00 PM
Nicely done...
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Date: 3/5/2016 8:38:00 PM
This has a lot of wonderful imagery, Armand. I wish I could read all your poetry tonight. Could you maybe slow them down. Spread them out, Armand. More people will read them if you only post a few a day!! I want everyone to read your artistry.
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Date: 3/2/2016 4:01:00 PM
Love it Armand...I like this style...I tried two...a fave and the arrow to top it off
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