The Kreutzer Sonata

(In 1807, Beethoven wrote a piano/violin
piece.  Tolstoy followed in 1890, with a novel.
He argued that matrimony can never work.)

What is a marriage? A fusion, or a tether? 
Two very different creatures, yoked together? 
I was a piano, you a violin: 
I, solid, calming, you, discordant, thin, 
and laced with bitterness. I was your base, 
and you provided brio, flourish, grace. 
A lacewing trapped inside a window frame, 
yet driven by one blind, unchanging aim, 
you struggled up until, played out, defeated, 
you fluttered down again, debased, depleted. 
A war's a love affair, and love's a war. 
We're so inept - or what's a heaven for? 
A nest of wasps, my grievances boiled over - 
but could there ever be a vita nuova? 
We never learned. I hammered pointlessly, 
while you abraded. Why could we not see? 

And so I played it stately, sad, no frills, 
while you kept up your repetitions, trills 
and variations. Hovering and wary, 
you shunned my structures. Ever more contrary, 
you coiled and squirmed in spasms both continuous, 
spontaneous, free-wheeling, lithe and sinuous. 
It seemed to me the harmony had gone: 
we sang on, yes, but each a separate song. 
Two butterflies together, intertwined, 
we tangled on the same, but different, line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Ashley Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 12:19 PM
Dear Michael, your golden poetic pen defies any impulse to be listless, careless, boring or ordinary. Instead, your poetry is passionate, intelligent, imaginative, enchanting and soul satisfying. I adored every line of this exquisite masterwork, especially your finale! Just a big "wow" and a big FAV, of course! :) Congratulations for your success in Mark's contest. It's an honor to share the podium with you, dear poet. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Coy Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Susan, I'm pleasantly astonished. It's deeply satisfying that you like this poem, but I wasn't expecting 'exquisite masterwork'. You leave me scrabbling for words to express my gratitude. As for sharing the podium, the honour is all mine. Compliments are great, but from an outstanding poet such as you, they're precious. Michael
Cornish Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 8:35 AM
Michael, wow, your images show a gifted depth of thought that leaves one wishing for more!t
Coy Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 8:40 AM
It's always satisfying to get praise, Craig, but when it comes from an accomplished poet it's special. Thank you. Michael
Toney Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 8:20 AM
Michael, Your literary allusions are brilliant collusions. Tolstoy’s dilemma in his Kreutzer novella—inspired by Beethoven’s Kreutzer Sonata as a metaphor for marital discord; John Donne’s wit meets Browning’s Andrea del Sarto’s ironic humor amid mutual destruction; and let’s not forget Dante’s La Vita Nuova’s ironic turn from rebirth in love to love gone wrong. Your brilliant collusions of allusions have worn me out. :-) A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 23 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on—Mile 24 has already started. Only 3 more miles to go before the Qualifiers’ Final Placement contest!
Coy Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 8:42 AM
As always, Mark, your observations are on the money. Your review reads like a printout of my artistic obsessions. Yet another 'thank you'. Michael
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