The Kraken Beneath

Hidden beneath the deep,
Is a monster that doth sleep,
And the journey to his dark chamber is steep.
At first glance,
You begin to weep.
His eyes almost put you in a trance,
For this monster there will be no song or dance.
It has been isolated for years and years,
but it has never wept,
Because monsters dont shed tears,
When it looks you in the eyes you can see your worst fears.
Has they show you that no one really cares,
About you or your tears.
And when he speaks its like words of glass,
But then its over in a flash,
Realizing with relief,
That its still down there,
And it still sleeps.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/5/2014 12:45:00 PM
Hey Ettie! Thanks for the kind comment on my poem. This is an awesome poem. "It has been isolated for years and years, but it has never wept, Because monsters dont shed tears" I love those lines. It gives us some sympathy for this beast. I also love the imagery. Well put together. : ) Always, Laura
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/5/2014 3:06:00 PM
Yea it does doesn't it lol NO thank you for commenting on my work it means sooo much to me-Love Ettie
Date: 7/2/2014 4:46:00 PM
This is a heartfelt, sad write from you. Marvelous job, gurl. :) Love the monster imagery in this verse. Very creative and great. Keep up the fantastic, poetic masterpieces. :) -DWB Will read again just in case I missed anything (as of meaning and such)
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/3/2014 12:15:00 PM
My oh my you are just the sweetest guy!!! Thank you David it means so much-Love Ettie
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