The Knock

He knocked upon my door one day
I answered by letting him in
I couldn't imagine what he would say
But something did begin

Something, too good to be true,
 one would say, something out of the blue
Something edging on the brink
something, that was you

Inside the knocking became so loud
Vibrations turning upside down
A miracle? I dare not ask
I was willing to take upon the task.

For many nights the knocking came
Long the hours, we were the same
till morning rise, it called my name
and i reached out to share in this game

This feeling, new and undiscovered
made one enchanted by the other.
In the heart the knocking grew,
Pounding out it's rhythms' new

Enchantment, ah the word is sweet
is also masked by being incomplete
Voices carry through the night
the closer the knocking
the stronger the might

then the words came from the knock...

And it threw me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Busha Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Thank you for your kind welcome. Blessings to you and yours.
Bell Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 8:04 AM
I have all sorts of connotations going on here, most of them sexual. Tell me it wasn't the builder knocking. lol
Busha Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 9:09 AM
lol it was not the builder
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