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The Kiss That Never Was

So close your breath tingles my skin.

A transient kiss, placed on illusive lips.
I so wish, this moment would eternally exist.

Unfortunate souls bounded by love.
Two cold hands, in one glove.

Yet so far it's all a blur, this confusion I must concur.

This moment won't go in vain. 

because i know, it will be a while till i dream of you again.

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Shane Thacker February 11, 2024 at 12:19 PM I hope someone will dream of me someday. Nicely, written.

Jeff Connelly October 15, 2022 at 2:27 PM Hello Painter. I enjoyed the half rhymes. Is English your native tongue? Thank you... The Painter October 30, 2022 at 4:14 PM sorry late reply! Im actually from norway, so my native language is norwegian :)

Mahtab Bangalee October 13, 2022 at 12:11 AM beautiful poem; enjoyed to read The Painter October 30, 2022 at 4:25 PM Thank you :)

Leotis Hargrove October 12, 2022 at 9:23 AM Thank you for sharing! Love will no longer in Time. Stay stay and strong! It soon will be your turn. Great work of art! Keep up the great work! Thanks again. The Painter October 30, 2022 at 4:25 PM Thank you kindly, This poem is actually about a dream i had of my long distance boyfriend.. But my poems interpretation is subjective always :)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2022 at 2:47 AM - Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem ... hopefully there will be many more in the future - :) ... heia Norge The Painter October 30, 2022 at 4:15 PM heia Norge!!

Beata Agustin August 4, 2022 at 10:07 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you. The Painter August 6, 2022 at 1:08 PM thank you very much! <3