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The Kiss That Never Was

So close your breath tingles my skin. A transient kiss, placed on illusive lips. I so wish, this moment would eternally exist. Unfortunate souls bounded by love. Two cold hands, in one glove. Yet so far it's all a blur, this confusion I must concur. This moment won't go in vain. because i know, it will be a while till i dream of you again.

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Date: 2/11/2024 12:19:00 PM
I hope someone will dream of me someday. Nicely, written.
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Date: 10/15/2022 2:27:00 PM
Hello Painter. I enjoyed the half rhymes. Is English your native tongue? Thank you...
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The Painter
Date: 10/30/2022 4:14:00 PM
sorry late reply! Im actually from norway, so my native language is norwegian :)
Date: 10/13/2022 12:11:00 AM
beautiful poem; enjoyed to read
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:25:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 10/12/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you for sharing! Love will no longer in Time. Stay stay and strong! It soon will be your turn. Great work of art! Keep up the great work! Thanks again.
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:25:00 PM
Thank you kindly, This poem is actually about a dream i had of my long distance boyfriend.. But my poems interpretation is subjective always :)
Date: 8/11/2022 2:47:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem ... hopefully there will be many more in the future - :) ... heia Norge
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:15:00 PM
heia Norge!!
Date: 8/4/2022 10:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.
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Date: 8/6/2022 1:08:00 PM
thank you very much! <3

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