The Kiss of Life

It felt like I was actually diving into the abysses
Touges start rolling,  but it was my actual first kiss
A feeling when every limb in your body goe’s weak
Up until then it was nothing but a peck on the cheek
                                                                  
And she asked why I was shaking, what's wrong
Still now I wonder why I was waiting for that long                                                        
Because I never knew of anything so bliss or rife   
That first kiss brought in me a new lease of life
                                                                                                           
                                                                                                                                       And what I felt was a shiver, was a feeling of rejoice
And you could hear the quiver that was in my voice
At first it was freighting, not knowing what to expect
But too it was exciting when to sets of lips connect

A guy who meets this girl and gets lost in thy embrace
A syh,and a murmur her mouth soft and sweet the taste 
Our heads moving right to left, stroking each others hair
A loss of breath, but I don't ever want to come up for air

And it's something I still miss, you know when she left me
Has to be better than the kiss of death, just like poison ivy
Mesmerizing, no one before has ever felt quit the same
Satisfying ,maybe she was familiar with the kissing game

I KIND OF LEFT THIS TILL THE LAST MINITE SO PROBABLY
NOT A GREAT DEAL OF THOUGHT OR THOUGH I DID TRY
TO DELVE DEEP IN TO THIS TO CAPTURE THAT ELEMENT

THIS FOR THE POET DESTROYERS CONTEST THE KISSING GAME
WRITTEN AUGUST 2012...................
p.s use'd your title at end as could not find words to finish 
but thought also it would be a nice homage to your self
x david scott  this is actually based on a true event 
back in february i1998 which Ive probably mentioned
about her in other poems ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/10/2013 4:33:00 AM
wow,wow,wow....beautiful kiss...that etches a beautiful memory..i soo love the piece..beautiful write Dave :-)
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Date: 2/14/2013 8:45:00 AM
A kiss can mean so much and to.others it can mean so little.but the first kiss will alwsys be remembered and usually it wont be the last.So sentimental Scott
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