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"THE KISS" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 15 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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The mist of your kiss

Heavenly dew on my lips

Immortality!










© Demetrios Trifiatis
         15 July 2017

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Probir Gupta

Date: 7/16/2017 9:26:00 AM

Spectacular ! ... Wonderful haiku ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/16/2017 10:45:00 AM

Thank you for your delightful comment dear, Probir! So good to receive your visit!

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/15/2017 3:42:00 PM

So beautiful....xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/15/2017 4:00:00 PM

So kind of you to drop by and leave such a lovely comment dear, Elizabeth! Thank you my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/15/2017 2:49:00 PM

- An unforgettable heavenly kiss, lovely written my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/15/2017 3:59:00 PM

An unforgettable friend you are dear, Anne-Lise! Thank you so very much! Hugs!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/15/2017 1:24:00 PM

Word perfect gorgeous :) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/15/2017 3:58:00 PM

Maureen, my friend, what a gorgeous comment! Thank you very much! xomo!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/15/2017 1:16:00 PM

That is sweet; an excellent poem; I thoroughly enjoyed reading it..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/15/2017 3:57:00 PM

You too kind my friend, MLK! Your visit pleases me a lot! Thank you so much!

Silent One

Date: 7/15/2017 10:59:00 AM

ooh... sensual and cellestial

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/15/2017 3:56:00 PM

WELCOME BACK my friend, Silent One! Your poetry and you were missed! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/15/2017 7:32:00 AM

I really liked the line, "Heavenly dew on my lips!" That is a fabulous line leaving me with images of a wet kiss! But with a special feeling to go along with it! I shared it with my wife and she agreed...we shared a great kiss after reading this wondrous write! Great Work!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/15/2017 10:15:00 AM

WHAT A WONDROUS SURPRISE my friend, Russel! I am happy to inspire you and your wife! Haha! How are you? Are your studies over? Will you be back? Hope so! Thank you for dropping by my good friend! God bless you!