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"THE KISS" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 15 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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The Kiss

The mist of your kiss

Heavenly dew on my lips

Immortality!










© Demetrios Trifiatis
         15 July 2017

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Probir Gupta

July 16, 2017 at 9:26 AM

Spectacular ! ... Wonderful haiku ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 16, 2017 at 10:45 AM

Thank you for your delightful comment dear, Probir! So good to receive your visit!

Elizabeth Kinch

July 15, 2017 at 3:42 PM

So beautiful....xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 4:00 PM

So kind of you to drop by and leave such a lovely comment dear, Elizabeth! Thank you my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 15, 2017 at 2:49 PM

- An unforgettable heavenly kiss, lovely written my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:59 PM

An unforgettable friend you are dear, Anne-Lise! Thank you so very much! Hugs!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 15, 2017 at 1:24 PM

Word perfect gorgeous :) xomo!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:58 PM

Maureen, my friend, what a gorgeous comment! Thank you very much! xomo!

M. L. Kiser

July 15, 2017 at 1:16 PM

That is sweet; an excellent poem; I thoroughly enjoyed reading it..

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:57 PM

You too kind my friend, MLK! Your visit pleases me a lot! Thank you so much!

Silent One

July 15, 2017 at 10:59 AM

ooh... sensual and cellestial

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 3:56 PM

WELCOME BACK my friend, Silent One! Your poetry and you were missed! Thank you for your gracious visit and comment!

Russell Sivey

July 15, 2017 at 7:32 AM

I really liked the line, "Heavenly dew on my lips!" That is a fabulous line leaving me with images of a wet kiss! But with a special feeling to go along with it! I shared it with my wife and she agreed...we shared a great kiss after reading this wondrous write! Great Work!

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 15, 2017 at 10:15 AM

WHAT A WONDROUS SURPRISE my friend, Russel! I am happy to inspire you and your wife! Haha! How are you? Are your studies over? Will you be back? Hope so! Thank you for dropping by my good friend! God bless you!

The Kiss

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