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The Kiss

He looks at her
Body calm - head cocked.

Her body rigid
vibrating with excitement.

The Kiss -
Said goodbye

	




By Judith Angell Meyer — 4/4/2015

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Mark Anthony Cotterman

July 31, 2016 at 12:02 PM

hello to the talented and kind Judith this touched me....so simple, yet so effective! you and your daughter are amazing writers. tis wonderful to be able to read you both :)

Daver Austin

May 21, 2015 at 10:53 AM

This could lead to a life of regret. Great speculation. Congrats on the selection. daver

Judith Angell Meyer

May 21, 2015 at 11:32 AM

Thank you for stopping by to comment daver! This most certainly could indeed lead to regret! ~J~

Skat A

May 18, 2015 at 1:34 PM

Judith, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Judith Angell Meyer

May 18, 2015 at 8:09 PM

Thank you SKAT. Appreciate that you stopped by. ~ J ~

Alexis Y.

May 15, 2015 at 7:20 PM

Very emotional. A good bye kiss can be sad. Also congrats on becoming a new premium lifetime member.-Alexis

Judith Angell Meyer

May 18, 2015 at 8:05 PM

Thank you so much. And really appreciate your welcome to lifetime membership. I've been a member for a lot of years, time to stay :-) ~ J ~

Tuelo.M Herbert

May 15, 2015 at 1:51 AM

Emotional..oh..

Judith Angell Meyer

May 18, 2015 at 7:58 PM

Thank you Herbert. Really got to a friend who recently broke up with her fella. ~ J ~

Etienne Lariviere

May 12, 2015 at 5:55 PM

Beautifully sad, loved this

Judith Angell Meyer

May 12, 2015 at 6:45 PM

Thank you Etienne.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

May 6, 2015 at 8:54 PM

The moment, draped in suspense life goes on. Very witty.

Judith Angell Meyer

May 12, 2015 at 6:51 PM

This was a poem born on a lesson in syntax. We were to use a sort of bait and switch, to send up the reader going in one direction then swerve off into another. This was my result, and was pleased.