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The Kiss

He looks at her Body calm - head cocked. Her body rigid vibrating with excitement. The Kiss - Said goodbye By Judith Angell Meyer — 4/4/2015

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Mark Anthony Cotterman

Date: 7/31/2016 12:02:00 PM

hello to the talented and kind Judith this touched me....so simple, yet so effective! you and your daughter are amazing writers. tis wonderful to be able to read you both :)

Daver Austin

Date: 5/21/2015 10:53:00 AM

This could lead to a life of regret. Great speculation. Congrats on the selection. daver

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/21/2015 11:32:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by to comment daver! This most certainly could indeed lead to regret! ~J~

Skat A

Date: 5/18/2015 1:34:00 PM

Judith, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/18/2015 8:09:00 PM

Thank you SKAT. Appreciate that you stopped by. ~ J ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/15/2015 7:20:00 PM

Very emotional. A good bye kiss can be sad. Also congrats on becoming a new premium lifetime member.-Alexis

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/18/2015 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much. And really appreciate your welcome to lifetime membership. I've been a member for a lot of years, time to stay :-) ~ J ~

Tuelo.M Herbert

Date: 5/15/2015 1:51:00 AM

Emotional..oh..

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/18/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thank you Herbert. Really got to a friend who recently broke up with her fella. ~ J ~

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 5/12/2015 5:55:00 PM

Beautifully sad, loved this

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/12/2015 6:45:00 PM

Thank you Etienne.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 5/6/2015 8:54:00 PM

The moment, draped in suspense life goes on. Very witty.

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/12/2015 6:51:00 PM

This was a poem born on a lesson in syntax. We were to use a sort of bait and switch, to send up the reader going in one direction then swerve off into another. This was my result, and was pleased.

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/5/2015 4:58:00 PM

Well I don't know what KQQL means, But I love your poem, and I hate that kiss, Jill

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/12/2015 6:54:00 PM

I agree about the kiss! Thanks for your comment!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/5/2015 2:16:00 PM

This is seriously KQQL... thanks

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 5/12/2015 6:56:00 PM

Thank you Judy. I liked the turn it took.

Pauline Mary Keown
Date: 5/5/2015 4:15:00 PM

clever words Pauline Keown