The Kiss

Collaboration Number Two between David Washington and myself.

BIG DAVE

I look at her face but all I can see is her lips
And I look into her eyes and they are deep as the abyss
Make me want to float, take off like ocean mist
But I don’t know if I’ll get this
I feel like ive put in enough time but it may not be enough
She throwin me all the signs but damn im lookin rough
The worst thing that could happen is that shell say no
Il just put my hand on her leg just to let her know
I wish subliminal messages work but they don’t
Because if they did this is what my mind would say
We have been hangin all night
I love your eyes
You are beautiful and one of a kind
I just wanna grab the bottom of your chin and begin
To move in closer and kiss your soft lips


MRS. SMITH 

All night long ive been hinting givin clues
Tryin to use 
my body as some device
To try and entice 
your lips to mine
boy I resign 
my heart is in your hands
im your biggest fan
wondering if I should 
make my move 
to try and prove 
this feelins real
I reach to feel 
Your lips
The touch the grasp
Gotta have The feelin last
No more regrets no more what ifs
Its time I make you mine
Make my move first and quench my thirst
Whats the worst
You could say no
Say you gotta go but 
Baby I cant help it im fallin headfirst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/18/2009 6:31:00 PM
great piece, Brian Baskin
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