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The Killing Jars

The Killing Jars As constant as the stars, You said, and I believed. Swore fealty unto Mars, So I'd not be deceived... This song of love's sweet bars... Died falling, from the jars. 1.26.2017©deborah burch Rhyme

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Date: 1/28/2017 3:30:00 AM
I love this! Such creative use of Killin Jars, honestly wonderful, this :)
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/28/2017 3:33:00 AM
Thank you Darren!!:)
Date: 1/27/2017 9:22:00 PM
Wonderful write Deb...Best wishes
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/28/2017 3:32:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!!:)

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