Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

The Killing Jars

The Killing Jars

As constant as the stars,
You said, and I believed. 
Swore fealty unto Mars,
So I'd not be deceived...
This song of love's sweet bars...
Died falling, from the jars. 

1.26.2017©deborah burch 


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Darren White January 28, 2017 at 3:30 AM I love this! Such creative use of Killin Jars, honestly wonderful, this :) Deborah Burch January 28, 2017 at 3:33 AM Thank you Darren!!:)

Joseph May January 27, 2017 at 9:22 PM Wonderful write Deb...Best wishes Deborah Burch January 28, 2017 at 3:32 AM Thank you Joseph!!:)