Mark Koplin Poet Rhyme

The Key To Success

With division in our hearts, tyranny will always succeed.
              It won’t matter how we fight, or how much we bleed.
          How much longer must we struggle and continue to suffer?
                We have to unite; we must create this new buffer.
                  Let's all wage war against the demons of man.
                     Ask for God’s strength, I pray we still can.
                   We must achieve victory, no matter the cost.
                       Let's try and unite, before we’re all lost.

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Frances Schiavina January 25, 2021 at 11:01 AM Congratulations Mark on your great winning poem. Mark Koplin January 29, 2021 at 5:22 AM Thanks Frances!

Unseeking Seeker January 23, 2021 at 9:54 PM “Ask for God’s strength, I pray we still can” ~ Yes, we can! Congrats on your win, Mark! Mark Koplin January 24, 2021 at 5:34 AM Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2021 at 12:01 PM - Congratulations on your great win in the Carolyn Devonshire contest, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mark Koplin January 23, 2021 at 12:28 PM Thank you Anne-Lise!

Caren Krutsinger January 23, 2021 at 4:15 AM " With division in our hearts, tyranny will always succeed." So true! I doubt we have been any more divided since the Civil War. The problem is people who were in "haha" power were labeling cities "democratic," "liberal" as if all democrats, all republicans and all liberals are exactly the same. I am so glad the divider is gone. Mark Koplin January 23, 2021 at 8:25 AM Now we can move forward.

Paula Goldsmith January 22, 2021 at 9:52 AM Congratulations on your win. As we ask for peace there is no peace. Enjoy your win/day/weekend with blessings........... Mark Koplin January 22, 2021 at 12:51 PM Thank you Paula! Have a wonderful day!

Carolyn Devonshire January 22, 2021 at 4:50 AM We have a lot of challenges facing us right now. It would be wonderful if people could unite to address them. Nicely penned, Mark. Congrats on your place in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn Mark Koplin January 22, 2021 at 5:11 AM Thank you so much Carolyn for your generous placement! Have a wonderful day my friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu January 19, 2021 at 10:55 AM Hello Mark Kooplin, I like the last 3 limes of yur poetry. Keep well . Enjoy your your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu January 20, 2021 at 11:21 AM Hello Mark Kooplin, you are welcome. Enjoy your day. Mark Koplin January 20, 2021 at 5:58 AM Thank you so much Darlene! Have a wonderful day my friend!

Jan Allison January 19, 2021 at 9:46 AM Such wise words and a lovely entry to the unity contest mark, good luck:-) hugs jan xx Mark Koplin January 19, 2021 at 10:19 AM Thanks Jan!