Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

The Key Holder

Open
A gate, a key
To greater turmoil
Overture to greater beauty
Unspoiled.

Fear not
Discovery
When your eyes look upon
Rough trail, hiding territory
Beyond.

Count not,
Walk regardless
Of the pros and the cons
Dreams are in the making, unless
You doubt.

Seek Ye
That gate, that key
That you may come to know
Treasure untold; that ye the key
Do hold.
 
By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 04.07.11

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James Foulk April 12, 2011 at 7:38 PM creative piece of work

Carolyn Devonshire April 10, 2011 at 8:16 PM Dear Caroline, I got your message and be assured it will take time to feel whole again. Shorter relationships seem to take less time. My prayers are with you. Love, Carolynx

Robert A. Dufresne April 10, 2011 at 7:01 PM That's good advice. It was given me when I was younger but as with Daver I guell I thought it did not pertain to me and was always afraid to try. Strange phenomenon but not rare. enjoyed the poem Caroline.

Daver Austin April 9, 2011 at 10:08 AM I like the positive tone of this one. My whole life I was afraid to do many things - write, compose music, paint. When I retired I tried all of the above and had a ball doing it. Love, Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown April 8, 2011 at 7:54 AM As this week draws to an end here I sit reading such amazing poetry. I am happy yours is one of the ones I am reading today Caroline. I wish you a healthy, joyful, inspiration filled weekend. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta April 8, 2011 at 7:01 AM Nice expressions of hope and inspirations, Caroline

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 7, 2011 at 8:45 PM Exquisite words create great imagery about this key Caroline.. this form used is perfect to convey inner thoughts my friend..enjoyed with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire April 7, 2011 at 3:53 PM Inspiring in so many ways, Caroline. I do believe we hold the keys to our own fate, but sometimes fear has us making poor choices. Love, Carolyn