The Joy Joy

There is a meadow with grasses green;
  where sweet life is ever ever after, 
  (and everything is what it seems)
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Hoffman Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 7:51 PM
A heavenly joyful haiku Keith; something to look forward to one day where sweet life is ever ever after and everything is what it seems!~Che :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 11:47 PM
Thanks Cheryl, they say seeing is believing, but more apt is believing is seeing....I believe one day we all shall be happy;-)
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:45 PM
I like that joy repeated twice. This is probably not something you put here, but there is an ad for Outlander appearing under your poem, and when I think of JOY, I think of that awesome couple whose love withstands time in that Starz drama!!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Always creative Andrea! A good thing to have if one is a poet...thanks for the Stars brainwave (lol)Joy is a joyful word....
Allison Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 4:08 PM
sounds like paradise Keith:-) hugs Jan xx
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 9:00 PM
;-)
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 2:36 PM
- A paradise .... lovely written, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Sunshine!
Gondolf Avatar
January 19, 2018 at 5:05 AM
Keith, a beautiful reverie. John
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 22, 2018 at 2:56 PM
Thanks John!
Smith Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 6:12 PM
This is great Keith
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 18, 2018 at 6:26 PM
Glad you enJOYed Tim;-)
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