Tahera Mannan Poet Rhyme

The Journey of a Soul

The soul left the cares below
A little sad to let it all melt
And looked towards the light aglow
Darkness all around he felt
No idea what fate he will be dealt
When sparks around him started to fly
As he was sucked up in this fiery belt
The time had come to say his final goodbye

22/07/2011
By Tahera Mannan
For Nette’s ‘Hutain this one’ contest

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James Marshall Goff September 30, 2015 at 7:10 AM intense....layers of unspoken emotional soul....giving voice....jimbo, nice Tahera!

Lee Ramage August 4, 2011 at 8:36 PM Excellent, very well done. Very descriptive. Congratulations on your win. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2011 at 1:32 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Tahera

Jack Horne August 4, 2011 at 11:41 AM Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 9:23 AM Congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Hutain" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2011 at 11:44 PM tahera, I love the spirtual slant you gave your entry. Well done, my friend, and congrats on your win.

Afroze Ali August 3, 2011 at 10:28 PM Congratulations Tahera!!! Nicely expressed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 5:36 PM congrats Tahera on your exciting win in Hutain contest with these amazing words of entry luv.. kudos to u..

Caryl Ramsdale August 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM Congratulations on your win in the HUTAIN THIS ONE...contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud. Good job! Blessings, Caryl

Fabiyas M V July 25, 2011 at 12:44 AM Nicely written for the contest,TAHERA

Robert A. Dufresne July 23, 2011 at 1:53 PM nice one Tahera and good luck in the contest/ they are alot of fun