The Journey Continues

Lost in confusion
Blurry passage of hope waits
Journey on hault


FOR JOURNEY CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 25, 2015 at 12:38 AM
Faleshia. Nice Haiku, thank you for sharing. ~LINDA~
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June 14, 2010 at 9:54 PM
I cant' quite remember this one. But gosh, it looks like you had done very well with it! (as you see, I like to find people with lotsa short poems and cruise one of their pages!) hope you don't mind all my little comments tonight. LUv, Andrea
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April 24, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Well done Faleshia, good luck..p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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