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The Journey Continues

Lost in confusion Blurry passage of hope waits Journey on hault FOR JOURNEY CONTEST

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/25/2015 12:38:00 AM

Faleshia. Nice Haiku, thank you for sharing. ~LINDA~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:54:00 PM

I cant' quite remember this one. But gosh, it looks like you had done very well with it! (as you see, I like to find people with lotsa short poems and cruise one of their pages!) hope you don't mind all my little comments tonight. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2010 11:59:00 AM

Well done Faleshia, good luck..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2010 11:28:00 AM

Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara