Debra Squyres Poet Rhyme

The Journey

Maybe not in this life, but surely the next….
Our feet will not grow weary
Our eyes will not grow teary
Maybe not in this life, but surely the next…
Our paths will be rewarded
Our steps forward unthwarted 
Perhaps still in this life and surely in the next…
Love will be revisited
Our thirst for it uninhibited
Perhaps still in this life and surely in the next…
Our dreams will see fruition
And peace will find its mission

~~Debra Squyres~~10-7-2012~~

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Elizabeth Wesley November 9, 2012 at 2:26 PM I think the future holds its own mysteries Deb; your poem looks at the bright side - last two lines make it all real. Lovely! :)

James Tate October 28, 2012 at 6:53 PM Good poem Debra. The feet of the believer will not grow weary in the next life. Thanks for posting this.

Harry Horsman October 10, 2012 at 10:43 AM this is wonderful Debra, and hopfully you are right.. enjoyed,,,,,,,

Robert Johnson October 9, 2012 at 4:12 PM Perhaps we will if we are still. And let God do his thing. And if we're quiet and don't make a riot, we'll hear the angels sing. The rest is just an earthly blur. The more I live, the more I'm sure. Nice inspiration Debra. Thanks. Debra Squyres October 9, 2012 at 5:48 PM Thanks for catching the typo !! and for you thoughts on my poem. Yep, it is a blur at times. Robert Johnson October 9, 2012 at 4:14 PM Fruition. :)

James Marshall Goff October 8, 2012 at 5:15 PM Original format, Debra! A sweet melanchollic drift...nice...jimbo

Anne-Lise Andresen October 8, 2012 at 12:07 PM Beautiful thoughts Debra, love it. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Parker October 8, 2012 at 10:02 AM A nice poem serenading the days of our life. A nice nexus between the mortal realm and the eternal realm.

Poet Tacito October 8, 2012 at 8:12 AM A necessary piece. Great lines, Debra!

Anne Rutherford October 8, 2012 at 7:51 AM I really like this Debra ,The last two lines are what we all strive for. Wonderful poem. Hugs Anne

Kash Poet October 8, 2012 at 7:41 AM Love this poem Debra..Hope this life will fullfil all our wishes.Enjoyed the read.

Wilma Neels October 8, 2012 at 7:32 AM There is no maybe about this Debra, I really love this write of yours and the message :) there is still hope out there!! love Wilma