The Journey

THE   JOURNEY


What a joy it could be to sit 
in a far going train with you, 
-  to look into the window  
for some time keeping silent

and  in  the  glass darkling
-  to discern your soul passing
among the moving crowds 
and  fields and hills and clouds,

not part of the firmament  -
just seeming,  since the true
you  sits  facing   me  too
in  this small compartment, 

 -  to hear  your  silent voice
hearing  my own heart’s joys. 
It is the journey endless, 
the  pilgrimage which binds us,

for there is  no  last hour.
The train  far going  is  our
unspoken commitment bound 
to  a   future  not  yet found.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 10, 2015 at 11:49 PM
NICE WIN....SKAT
Inman Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Lovely, lovely poem. Beautifully written, Sidney.
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August 10, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sidney! Great work!
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August 9, 2015 at 5:27 PM
OMG, this is magnificent. HOw I wish you would visit me. It is so rarely that I see you here and then I happen upon one of your poems like at one of these winner lists and it leaves me breathless. A FAVE
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July 21, 2011 at 9:56 AM
peaceful and easy...Love it....Jack
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July 10, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Syd. Love, Carol
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September 13, 2010 at 5:52 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sydney. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 12, 2010 at 3:22 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight... soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck..with luv..
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