The Jewel of Jealousy

I've been jealous of Time,
sharing it with the foot steps of Days
feeding it to the appetite of Age,

Possessive of unbuyable beauty
that roams reckless within a creation fenceless,
senseless ownership, owning only the yawns of yesterdays,
jealous of glory as it ransacks the wrinkles of haughty heroism
hungering for more rumor in the religion of rhapsody,
following it throughout the carols & catacombs of hearts greedy,
feeling the charm of challenge to earn my woman's wishes,
jealous of commitment that sits silent in the center of attraction,

Jealousy is the General of my affection's arsenal,
a strategist that tells me love is worth a crusade,
taught me not to surrender to simple circumstance,
that my woman's warmth puts my skills on parade,
relentless progress is the ambition of Jealousy,
a must be aptitude, a must see attitude,
jealousy is that drum beat in my bravery,
war paints the face of my fears,
sharpens the claws of my soul,
a song that stammers not on success,
a lyrical miracle,
should not lose, could not lose, will not lose -

J.A.B.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/28/2014 8:28:00 PM
This is very good poem. A different way to look at jealousy. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Justin Bordner
Date: 5/29/2014 11:10:00 AM
Jealousy widens our eyes, and can motivate our memories to make new life. Seeing life diffetently is what makes us artists Lucilla, thanks for visiting again. J.A.B.
Date: 4/4/2014 10:36:00 AM
J A B., Jealousy is good for the soul. My mother once told me, a woman who show's no jealousy will never own her man's heart completely. No worries, I know my limits once jealousy' starts progressing the green eyed monster. I have crazy friends, that due the unthinkable when jealous over another female. Better Yet, I've seen men react to abuse when over zealous of anyone looking at his women or so. Anywayz. I know that's not the jealousy you are talking about here. ha-ha, this is a cute and mighty fine write. Sticking it to us again. Another fav. Only cuz I can go on about the affections of jealousy forever. Hugs. ~SKAT~
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/4/2014 8:52:00 PM
Luv your insights Skay, your Mother spoke wisdom. If you are incapble of experiencing jealousy for something, then how much do you really care for it right. Jealousy can be a monster, or it can be a positive revelation. Gotchya thinkin. Thanks for the fav. Honor Skat. J.A.B.
Date: 4/2/2014 4:01:00 PM
I completely relate with this piece, though it is just so intelligently written and far more brilliant sentiments shine from it.. I especially related to those first couple of lines on the first stanza. Fantastic, original expressions as well:"Yawn of yesterdays" , and "sharpens the claws of my soul" ... And just powerful and determined lines - "should not lose, could not lose, will not lose" ...Got me good on this one Justin. As always, Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/4/2014 8:46:00 PM
Happy you picked those lines Laura, they really carry the pulse of the poem. I like gettin you good, means I've discovered or expressed something important. I just needed to address the balance, quality, of a trait like Jealousy, how it can do us a valuable service, allowed me get philosophical. Thanks so much Laura. J.A.B.
Date: 3/31/2014 11:26:00 PM
wow! Justin..... It does become old. I've' been there and done that. Call me crazy! Once in a blue moon, I'll get a taste of something that might trigger the green eyed monster. However, I'm not the kind of gal who keeps it under wraps. The only way to get rid of the feeling, is talking about it. BOOM! The next thing you know:) The jealousy was nothing more than a greedy need of attention. In other words, sometimes the soul, does not like to share. Love this... Hugs~ LINDA
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/4/2014 8:40:00 PM
Tease away, tease away ladies...
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Skat A
Date: 4/4/2014 10:41:00 AM
Don't be fibbing PD :) You need to open your heart to some true jealousy. ha-ha. JAB. I'm teasing pd's comment. Don't mind me:)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 4/1/2014 12:45:00 PM
You understand Linda, as we all truly do, that a force like Jealousy can be detrimental in a weak soul, but managed in honest & wise hands it can be molded into amazing determination to preserve, and enhance the greatest things in our lives. I just needed to express respect for this unavoidable, unfairly demonized human trait. The final line here riterates the beauty that can be Jealousy. J.A.B.
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Date: 3/31/2014 11:27:00 PM
Awesome ending... Linda
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