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IF I SENT YOU AN INVITE WOULD YOU ACCEPT OR WOULD YOU REPLY SOME OTHER TIME NOT TONIGHT IF I SENT YOU AN INVITE STATING COME AS YOU ARE WOULD YOU REPLY I HAVE NO GAS FOR THE CAR IF I SENT YOU AN INVITE PLEADING FOR YOU TO COME WOULD YOU REPLY SORRY I CAN'T I HAVE SOMETHING IMPORTANT TO GET DONE WITH SADNESS IN MY EYES AND PAIN IN MY HEART I KNOW IN THE END IT WILL DEATH DO US PART SO IF I SEND YOU THIS INVITE PLEASE DON'T IGNORE THE RSVP I'M TRYING TO GIVE YOU EVERLASTING LIFE FOR ALL ETERNITY

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Date: 6/5/2016 9:14:00 PM
kenneth gilmer, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/29/2012 1:35:00 PM
nice piece
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Date: 3/29/2012 6:38:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup Kenneth. Well done poem. - love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/29/2012 4:56:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Kenneth. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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