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The Intruder

The kitchen knife slipped - blood now dripping from 
the intruders fingertips.



27.08.2020
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Copyright © Carol Mitra | Year Posted 2020

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Paula Goldsmith

August 31, 2020 at 9:56 AM

Congratulations on your win. Guess we have all done this when cooking. Boy does it hurt. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and your day....................

August 31, 2020 at 5:50 PM

Thank you Paula :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2020 at 2:45 PM

love it when people get their just desserts, or in this case a bloody mary!! Congrats, Carol. Clever one.

August 30, 2020 at 6:53 PM

Yes that's true Andrea....thank you and much love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 29, 2020 at 1:15 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Carol :) - // Anne-Lise :)

August 29, 2020 at 7:02 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise....much love :)

Krish Radhakrishna

August 29, 2020 at 5:02 AM

Please call the police to provide first aid! Congrats on your win!

August 29, 2020 at 5:10 AM

Ha Ha...will do Krish..Thanks.

August 29, 2020 at 3:31 AM

Or did you stab him??? Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

August 29, 2020 at 5:09 AM

Leaving a bit of grease on the handle did the Intruder in :) Thank you...much appreciated.

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