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The Intruder

The kitchen knife slipped - blood now dripping from the intruders fingertips. 27.08.2020 When Plans don't go to plan Sponsor Silent One.

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Date: 8/31/2020 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Guess we have all done this when cooking. Boy does it hurt. A wonderful write. Enjoy your win and your day....................
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/31/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Paula :)
Date: 8/30/2020 2:45:00 PM
love it when people get their just desserts, or in this case a bloody mary!! Congrats, Carol. Clever one.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/30/2020 6:53:00 PM
Yes that's true Andrea....thank you and much love :)
Date: 8/29/2020 1:15:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Carol :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/29/2020 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise....much love :)
Date: 8/29/2020 5:02:00 AM
Please call the police to provide first aid! Congrats on your win!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/29/2020 5:10:00 AM
Ha Ha...will do Krish..Thanks.
Date: 8/29/2020 3:31:00 AM
Or did you stab him??? Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Carol Mitra
Date: 8/29/2020 5:09:00 AM
Leaving a bit of grease on the handle did the Intruder in :) Thank you...much appreciated.

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